Working on chapter 3. Done with the editing of the first sex scene and sent it to my friend in New York. She's already told me she enjoyed it and that's it's pretty hot. It still needs a little more editing but already feeling encouraged to continue writing in the erotic romance category.
Here's a tiny unedited excerpt of what I wrote:
...Alex knew he wouldn't last much longer if she continued like this but there was no way in hell he was going to make her stop. Instead Alex grabbed a fistful of her hair and slowly guided her to a less torturing pace. She moaned around him in response. He knew he hadn't hurt her. It was only a sign of her own arousal building. Vanessa confirmed this when she looked up at him...
Next up is the rewrite of the confession scene. I want it to be dramatic and heart breaking to hear the reason why Vanessa left Alex and what his reaction is.